Pray for Hustlers ft. Aladin

*The rapper is obviously a good rapper but his style of rap made him the wrong choice of rapper to have had on the song.

*You sang completely in line with the instrumentals, your lyrics related well with the title of the song and the entire content of your lyrics wasn't bad, except for one flaw I noticed about them. They seemed rather disorganized. (Writing and arranging the lyrics of songs before recording helps a lot in ensuring that lyrics are in order. If you did write and organise this song before recording, then I am sorry, it was all wasted time and effort. You really should try to improve in that aspect for better organised lyrical contents)

*You have sweet melody (This is your selling point), but you sang in a very low tone which badly affected the beauty of the song. {Please, work towards maintaining beautiful melody, while singing audibly (What I mean in unprofessional terms is, "increase your singing volume and always choose good melody for your songs like you did on this one) This is because most music listeners would only bother checking out your lyrical contents if your vocals are appealing to their ears. Such listners could quickly conclude that: (1) you sound terrible when you sing audibly and (2) that was the reason you chose to sing in a low tone and sound nice.

*Your intro and outro were terribly treated like jokes. (As an artist that's not popular yet, I believe it's important to always and audibly mention your Stage Name/Brand-Name on all your songs, especially in the intro and outro of the songs. When people become very familiar with the name, you can stop adding it, if you don't wish to continue adding)

*The production (instrumental) was good. Unfortunately, I cannot say the same about the mixing and mastering. (This was no fault of yours though.)

Freeson Geo, this is actually a very cool song, but I still have to be 100% honest with you because, I know you have the ability to do better than this, if you put your heart to it:

Best of Afro .... Return Hustlers Anthem